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Monday, December 31, 2018
SLJ Picture Perfects Activity 3 Day 4 Week 2
Once apon a time there was a lady that travelled to another country on the other side of the world. She lived in New Zealand and went to Canada witch is a long time to travel. But when she got there she was shocked because she never knew what Canada looked like. She walked for a little bit and went on top of her hotel. There was lots little and big buildings in the view. It was night time so she had to go to her room in the hotel. When it was morning she went to the top of her hotel and tried to take the best picture she had ever taken. So she stood on the corner of the building and grabbed her phone. But suddenly she slipped and fell down to the bottom of the 10 storey hotel she was staying at. Someone called the ambulance and she stayed in hospital for about six months. When she got out she left in a wheel chair because when she recovered they said she was paralized. It was so sad because she could never walk again because of that one accident. When she returned to her home in New Zealand she said she was never going back to Canada.
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Kia Ora Taya!
ReplyDeleteWell done for finishing this SLJ activity, 'Picture Perfect' and for providing a piece of commentary for this image. I really appreciate that you've started with "Once upon a time..."— this is a marvellous way to catch your audience in to your piece of writing.
The distance between New Zealand and Canada is a very long way to travel, so you're absolutely right when you say "which is a long time to travel".
Wow— your story took quite the dramatic turn, didn't it?! I really like the creativity behind this piece of writing, particularly the bit where we discovered she had become paralysed! Who would've thought!
Well done for such a wonderfully creative piece, Taya.
I look forward to reading more of your work :)
Cheers,
Jordan