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Friday, January 11, 2019

SLJ The Southern Lights Activity 1 Day 4 Week 3

Late at night if you want to see it
   In the sky shining bright
     Green dancing veils around the light in the sky
        Horizon witch it is bright
            They have a green and pink shade over the horizon 
                 Southern lights in New Zealand
My acrostic poem about the Southern lights.

1 comment:

  1. Heya Taya,

    Good job for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity, 'The Southern Lights' and for creating an acrostic poem with the letters 'LIGHTS'.
    Wow— I'm really impressed by your poetic ability, Taya! I can see that you enjoy writing, am I right in saying this? I particularly enjoy this line: "Green dancing veils around the light in the sky"— did you come up with this yourself? Because it is incredible!
    Horizon which is bright is also a clever way to use the letter 'H'

    Keep up the great work, Taya!

    Thanks,

    Jordan

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