What I see in this cloud picture is like an old toy rabbit that got used a lot and that is worn out and sits in a basement in a box that says old toys. Then I also see that the eye is quite unique than any other toy because it's eye is quite large and it glows. Then lastly the legs and the arms are sort of going up like it is scratching it's ear and it's belly.
Kia Ora Taya,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this SLJ activity, 'Crazy, Cool Clouds' and for offering a wonderful description for this cloud image. Can you please tell your readers what number image you've chosen out of the three?
I LOVE your description here, what a great idea to not only state that it looks like a rabbit, but that it is an old toy, and that it sits in the basement in a box with the words 'old toys' written on it— SO CLEVER!!
I really like how you've spotted the change in highlights on the image too, and said that it is a unique eye that glows, and you're right, it does look as though the rabbit is scratching its ear and its belly.
I'm really enjoying reading your creative writing Taya, you've blown me away.
Keep it up!
Thanks,
Jordan